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Uncle
Albert was a butcher, physically strong, an ex-soldier, he was
no coward either.
There are too many elements here, and they are badly linked.
The statement would be better split into two.
Either |
Uncle Albert was a butcher, physically strong, and an ex-soldier.
He was no coward either. |
Or |
Uncle Albert was a butcher. He was physically strong, an
ex-soldier, and no coward either. |
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