|  Although
blessed with very attractive features, which give her a Mediterranean
colouring, and a rather mysterious type of glamour, she is nevertheless
a humble and reclusive figure. She has been married twice – both
times to men of financial substance.
This is a bad example.
The first sentence begins with a conjunction [always risky].
The topic of the paragraph appears to be her appearance.
The subject comes awkwardly at the end of the sentence ['she'].
The second sentence changes to a different topic.
The final phrase introduces another topic.
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