My
mother likes chocolate cake. She buys it from the supermarket
whenever my aunt comes to visit. They sit talking for hours,
and my aunt is very boring.
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The topic changes in each successive sentence.
There is no real relationship between the sentences.
My
mother likes chocolate cake. She buys it from the supermarket
whenever my aunt comes to visit. They sit talking for hours,
and my aunt is very boring.
